Crossed Napping

[jamagica]

I personally like how this turned out, but tell me what you guys think?

 

[Dcrymes84]

why did u chop off the head ?

 

[jamagica]

why would you not chop off the head? expand on your question? By the way, it's not chopped off..that's the hair there

 

[jamagica]

bump

 

[Soujiro]

The clarity and crispness of the image is lacking. The first has nice composition..

 

[kundalini]

Why did you cut his foot off, then?

 

[jamagica]

um..the framing looks better that way. And it's not the clarity/crispness, the high quantity of noise affects the "seem" of clarity. Facebook compression also has a lot to do with it. Could somebody with REASONS critique this please? kundalini, why does it matter if the foot is cut out? In this pohto, I"m trying to emphasize shapes and composition...if you're just being stupid, then get a life

Soujiro, thanks for your help