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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by kfirg, Dec 10, 2015.

  1. kfirg

    kfirg No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    hi..

    some pic that i love from my last shots

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    oFUNGUSo TPF Noob!

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    stunning lady
     
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  3. Donde

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    A real beauty.
     
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    FITBMX Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Very nice I like the lighting! :)
     
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    a couple more :) 8.jpg

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    Donde TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Of these two I like the head position of the first one more but too much is cropped off so I like the composition of the second better.
     
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    Donde - which one is better of these two ? :

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    Image #3 is hands down the best of the series. By the subtle shift of head tilt, she now has a more dramatic look and draws you in with the eyes. The others seem somewhat boring compared to this frame. Great job
     
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    ruggedshutter thanks!
    i agree with you but on image #3 we cant see her open jacket..
     
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    Number 3 is mesmerizing.
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    Yes, agreed, I can only imagine how incredible it could have been as a "tall"...without all that unused white space pulling the eyes away from her, in all her glory. I like the lighting on the leather jacket on the left side of the frame, but her hair could benefit from some lightening on the right hand side...the hair just sort of merges into a jumble of blackness, with no real hair detail showing.
     
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    Derrel should i try to crop the image without the white space?
    here is the cropped one

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