Daughter & Father

[Takeda]

Daughter

Daughter & Father

Father

 

[mmaria]

would you hate me if I tell you that these are just snapshots imho?

she's cute of course, but I don't see anything that will make these images interesting

sorry

 

[EIngerson]

I agree with Maria. but on a side note. The resemblance from their eyes is amazing.


Tip, drop the yellows down a tad. It will help with that halogen light hue that's going on. You could mess with the orange slider, but it will destroy the skin tones.

 

[Takeda]

would you hate me if I tell you that these are just snapshots imho?

she's cute of course, but I don't see anything that will make these images interesting

sorry

Thank you both for your comments. I appreciate them.

I agree with Maria. but on a side note. The resemblance from their eyes is amazing.


Tip, drop the yellows down a tad. It will help with that halogen light hue that's going on. You could mess with the orange slider, but it will destroy the skin tones.

 

[mmaria]

I agree with Maria.

awww... Did you just called me by my name, without that silly one "m" ? thank you :hug::

 

[MSnowy]

I think they are very nice candids.

 

[paigew]

I agree with above. These seem like random snaps...no eye contact, unflattering facial expressions. In the second she is chewing, and has the white cup right in her face.

 

[Designer]

#1 Subject is looking toward the right edge of the frame, so there should be more space in front of her face rather than behind her head.

#2 Capturing two subjects you should try to get both in focus.

#3 Not too bad, but he is not ready for his closeup.

Overall, the single portraits probably should have been framed vertically, and generally I like candids, but your subjects are rather static in expression.

 

[Takeda]

I think they are very nice candids.

I agree with above. These seem like random snaps...no eye contact, unflattering facial expressions. In the second she is chewing, and has the white cup right in her face.

#1 Subject is looking toward the right edge of the frame, so there should be more space in front of her face rather than behind her head.

#2 Capturing two subjects you should try to get both in focus.

#3 Not too bad, but he is not ready for his closeup.

Overall, the single portraits probably should have been framed vertically, and generally I like candids, but your subjects are rather static in expression.

Thank you all for your posts, and critiques!!