day out

chris82 · Sep 16, 2006

i took these shots today,some are just mediocre pics but theres one or two id like some feedback on please

1)wahey...its me

2)didnt go as planned

3)river

4)shadows

5)smiler

6)the end

any critiqe welcome

chris82 · Sep 16, 2006

oldnavy170 · Sep 16, 2006

The little one sleeping is cute!!!!

EBphotography · Sep 16, 2006

Number 1 and the smiling one are more like snapshots, I'd put em there!
I like the shadow one a lot.
I think the tidepool could be a lot more effective if it wasn't over exposed and maybe from a lower angle?

You're off to a good start!

mysteryscribe · Sep 16, 2006

I like the shadows a lot, and of course the sleeping child in brown tones.

LaFoto · Sep 17, 2006

Personally, I like to see you - so now we know who you are even a bit better. Cool.

Yes, it may be a snapshot, but ... yeah. It is here now along with the tidepool (that you yourself say did not come out in the way you had planned) and the shadows and the sleeping girl.