I kinda like the framing. There's a good sightline across the negative space there, so she fits into the frame just fine. Not sure I love having so much of the tree there, and it would be stronger all around (but still essentially the same image) if the camera had been panned a hair to the left. I think it's too de-saturated, and I think the de-saturated thing is just a crummy/cheap derivative of the vintage filters people love so much. It's definitely not a "portrait" though.
Isn't there some awful line of birthday/etc cards that use selective and de-saturated colors, often of pictures of little kids in cute hats? This reminds me of those.