Did a few shoots after past 2-3 weeks C&C please "3pics"

[.::joe::.]

these are both my friends the female does modeling so she asked me for a shoot, the male one of my best friends did some pics of him for his familey

ok here goes

 

[kazze]

I like the third shot best. Subject is not distracted with too much background blur. I think the first two have too much attention on what is behind the subject.
Looking at the second shot, my eyes were wondering off to the blurry background because there is so much of it.
The pose is better in the second shot to me, more flattering to the subject.
Just something I noticed, to me - the female subject has nice eyes and maybe should be something to focus on.

 

[.::joe::.]

I like the third shot best. Subject is not distracted with too much background blur. I think the first two have too much attention on what is behind the subject.
Looking at the second shot, my eyes were wondering off to the blurry background because there is so much of it.
The pose is better in the second shot to me, more flattering to the subject.
Just something I noticed, to me - the female subject has nice eyes and maybe should be something to focus on.

I can see what you mean i have others that are not like that just wanted to see what people thought of those..

she asked for them to be like that also so did a few like it.

i'll just keep at it