Did I improve? C&C

[NickLane]

Just took these a few days ago and wanted to hear some thoughts on them. Is there anything that I can do to improve?

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[Vtec44]

I think both could use a much tighter crop. The background in the first one has way too many distracting elements. The 2nd one has a rock sticking out at the bottom of the frame, cropped feet. Exposure looks okay on my monitor, white balance seems a bit off on the 2nd one.

 

[NickLane]

I think both could use a much tighter crop. The background in the first one has way too many distracting elements. The 2nd one has a rock sticking out at the bottom of the frame, cropped feet. Exposure looks okay on my monitor, white balance seems a bit off on the 2nd one.

Thanks and yea I realized shortly after taking the first one that there were some distractions in the background, it kind of annoys me too ill have to keep that in mind next time

 

[paigew]

yes the background is very destracting. In #1 all I can see is the tree and chord growing out of her chest. Also I do not really like the posing of the first one. Laying down with your hands up totally flatens your boobs and looks weird. like waiting for a breast exam from the gyn . Love the exposure of #1, her hair looks so pretty and all the different highlightes show up

 

[thereyougo!]

No.1 also looks like she is in danger of falling off the back of the wall.

 

[Cyclographist]

I like the look of the first model and the model has a fantastic pose, but it looks like the stone pillar is coming out of her chest.

 

[Mo.]

I actually think she has an awkward position in the first one.

 

[ph0enix]

I like the look of the first model and the model has a fantastic pose, but it looks like the stone pillar is coming out of her chest.

Looks like it's the same person in both photos.