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Just took these a few days ago and wanted to hear some thoughts on them. Is there anything that I can do to improve?
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I think both could use a much tighter crop. The background in the first one has way too many distracting elements. The 2nd one has a rock sticking out at the bottom of the frame, cropped feet. Exposure looks okay on my monitor, white balance seems a bit off on the 2nd one.
 
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I think both could use a much tighter crop. The background in the first one has way too many distracting elements. The 2nd one has a rock sticking out at the bottom of the frame, cropped feet. Exposure looks okay on my monitor, white balance seems a bit off on the 2nd one.

Thanks and yea I realized shortly after taking the first one that there were some distractions in the background, it kind of annoys me too ill have to keep that in mind next time
 

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yes the background is very destracting. In #1 all I can see is the tree and chord growing out of her chest. Also I do not really like the posing of the first one. Laying down with your hands up totally flatens your boobs and looks weird. like waiting for a breast exam from the gyn :lol:. Love the exposure of #1, her hair looks so pretty and all the different highlightes show up
 

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No.1 also looks like she is in danger of falling off the back of the wall.
 

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I like the look of the first model and the model has a fantastic pose, but it looks like the stone pillar is coming out of her chest.
 

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I actually think she has an awkward position in the first one.
 

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I like the look of the first model and the model has a fantastic pose, but it looks like the stone pillar is coming out of her chest.

Looks like it's the same person in both photos.
 

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