Different Lines

[PixelRabbit]

A few shots of different lines, would really love to hear your thoughts (especially on the compositions )

Car wash: Water








Greenhouse: Plastic Skin (Just noticed the top left corner, I'll fix that)






Greenhouse: Hard Plastic









Mouse eye view of the attic of the workshop.

 

[Frequency]

Exxxxxcellent; i like them all
#1 is my best

 

[pixmedic6 5]

not a big abstract fan... but i DO like the shot of the attic. (the others are pretty cool, just not my thing)

 

[Dagwood56]

My favorites are # 1 & #2. Really cool!

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

Number 2, with the corner fixed, would be my vote.

 

[Designer]

#2 with top cropped to better proportions is my fave.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Thanks everyone

Designer, I had trouble with that one, how much do you figure? About 1/4 off the top for a more square comp?

 

[Designer]

Thanks everyone

Designer, I had trouble with that one, how much do you figure? About 1/4 off the top for a more square comp?

I didn't try any templates on it, but try a "golden mean" rectangle on it. Something less than 1/4, more like 1/5 or 1/6 off the top.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Ok my noob is going to hang out here...

Template?....

 

[gsgary]

shot 2 is the best but it is too straight on try lower angles

 

[sm4him]

Love #2, but I too would like to see a different crop on it. If it were mine, I'd either take just a little off the top of it--not sure how to explain this, but I'd crop it so you lose the entire first angled "panel" or "slat" in the upper left corner.
OR--I'd crop it WAY down, right at or just above where you stop getting the darker blue shading on the "slats." That probably doesn't make sense either.

Pretty cool either way, though.

 

[sleist]

Really like #1. Nice work.

 

[PixelRabbit]

Thanks everyone
This greenhouse is a love hate relationship, I know there area lot of yummy shots in on and around it but I have yet to figure it out. It mocks me!
I will take all of your suggestions next time I go out to shoot it.

 

[tedfoto]

#1 and #2. I like lines when they lead you around.

 

[Derrel]

Your photographic eye is improving quite rapidly these days. I see in you the ability to translate "concepts" into actual photographs. Your progress is very,very noticeable to me over the last few months. You're starting to get to what we used to say back in the 1980's---you're beginning to get to that kickin a$$ and taking names stage, where your vision is simply translated into photos, without a lot of difficulty. You have an idea, and know how to "realize" it; to make it a reality, a photo, a capture. You should be proud of the accomplishments you've made through hard work, experimentation, practice, and dogged persistence.