Dreaming Up a Storm

bleeblu

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Just wanted to share. Critiques welcome.


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Jeremy Z

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Nice idea, but it comes off as a little fakey to me.

Maybe you're after a bit of "surreality."
 

Austin Greene

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Hmmm, its not a bad concept at all, just as Jeremy said. However, I agree with Jeremy that the added elements seem a bit too cut and dry. Try blending the moon a bit so its edges arent as sharp. And those clouds are pretty obviously lit with daylight, they're lacking that silvery coloring that nighttime clouds have. I would almost want to have the moon mostly obscured by clouds, kind of nestled in a patch of them and just poking through, with a more "stormy" feel to the clouds.

Still, I like the effort and the concept :)
 

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