Engaged couple portrait. C&C Please

burnws6 · Jan 30, 2010

astrostu · Jan 30, 2010

It's good, but to me there's something about the guy's face that looks a little off. Could be his smile, could be HIS right eye with the lighting ... not really sure. I would also clone out the stray hair over the woman's left breast.

burnws6 · Jan 30, 2010

astrostu said:
It's good, but to me there's something about the guy's face that looks a little off. Could be his smile, could be HIS right eye with the lighting ... not really sure. I would also clone out the stray hair over the woman's left breast.

Ahh, thanks lol. Didn't even notice that hair.

szebah · Jan 30, 2010

Maybe a little sharpening?

burnws6 · Jan 30, 2010

szebah said:
Maybe a little sharpening?

Is that sarcasm lol? Because it's tack sharp :lol:

transformed · Jan 30, 2010

very pretty- could just be my monitor, but I am seeing an orangish/red sheen in the highlight areas on their foreheads? I would clone out the stray hair on her, and maybe do a slight bit of healing on his complexion? Also the hot spot on the noses if you can smooth them out might be nice.

burnws6 · Jan 30, 2010

transformed said:
very pretty- could just be my monitor, but I am seeing an orangish/red sheen in the highlight areas on their foreheads? I would clone out the stray hair on her, and maybe do a slight bit of healing on his complexion? Also the hot spot on the noses if you can smooth them out might be nice.

Good catch on those hot spots. I'll post a revised version later on.

Here's another one from that day: