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Engagement shoot over the weekend

shaunly

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This is my second time doing engagement. Still have a lot more to PP. CC are welcome. Thanks =)
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not bad... dislike the head being cropped out in the last two pics. also why cut off his shoulder in the first pic?

personally not a fan of the heavy vignetting, but It seems a lot of customers are, so I can't really blame you.

04 appears a bit too yellow to me... maybe turn down saturation a tad to even it out. or it could be that its a bit too green... just makes them look sickly.

otherwise your spot on. Excellent lighting and great composition (besides things mentioned above). your images are all very sharp and well shot.

one quick question... looking at your sig.... why do you have the 28-200 in your arsenal if you also have the 80-200 2.8?
 
not bad... dislike the head being cropped out in the last two pics. also why cut off his shoulder in the first pic?

personally not a fan of the heavy vignetting, but It seems a lot of customers are, so I can't really blame you.

04 appears a bit too yellow to me... maybe turn down saturation a tad to even it out. or it could be that its a bit too green... just makes them look sickly.

otherwise your spot on. Excellent lighting and great composition (besides things mentioned above). your images are all very sharp and well shot.

one quick question... looking at your sig.... why do you have the 28-200 in your arsenal if you also have the 80-200 2.8?

Thanks for the CC. I still have lot of pictures left to be PP, so I'll see if I can improve on some things.

As for the lens, my 28-200mm is my do it all lens. It's great when I'm covering events/PJ assignment. In those situation, things can change very quickly, no time to switch out lens. That when I just through this baby on. :mrgreen:
 
I think you did a good job overall!
 
You need to be more consistent with the PP. All the color pics have different tones.
 
Great job so far, i was going to mention different color tones and composition. Cutting of the head doesn't bother me too much in the last two but the shoulders on 1 definately bothered me a bit
 
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I like the set overall. Hope you find some more winners as you keep editing. #3 seems a little cool compared to the others and is probably my least favorite edit. Overall it looks like you did a great job, I am sure they will be thrilled!
 

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