Enola II

DanOstergren · Apr 23, 2014

Another shot of my friend Enola. When I met her a month ago she was really serious about becoming a model and makeup artist, but for some reason a couple days ago she decided she was taking a break to focus on other things. It's a shame, because I thought she was getting really great with both, but I think she may be a little scared to jump in and commit to it.

kathyt · Apr 23, 2014

I love the shadows, but the posing needs some work.

BenT · Apr 23, 2014

Nice shot! love the shadows!

DanOstergren · Apr 23, 2014

kathyt said:
I love the shadows, but the posing needs some work.

How would you adjust this pose?

pixmedic · Apr 23, 2014

I like the lighting, but she looks totally bored.
Also, whats up with her hair?
Her right side looks great. her left side....looks kinda unkempt.
also, im a little distracted by her left shoulder being out of focus.