eternal sunline

[manda]

if all the goodbyes
disappear,
where do the kisses flow?
i'd write you a letter wrapped
in my tears
if only there were enough for you to know

id build you a shadow
of me
to hide behind in guilt
a song for you to lie with
a love good enough to die with

i would have crossed a thousand suns for you
and pieced together your heart and thoughts
with your hand at my side
and not in my way

i would have died
within the life i knew
if only to spend one night with you.

 

[Luminosity]

I really like your writing style Manda ..... this piece and the first piece you posted in this forum both express the emotions behind the words very well. I can relate to the thoughts/emotions expressed ...
Your writing comes from a raw , honest place so thank you for sharing it :hug:

 

[manda]

Thanks
Ive always been told things like that.
This other forum Ive posted in where people dont know me well..
this guy said "you scare me" lol

 

[markc]

Wow... Some amazing imagery you've spun, manda.

 

[terri]

I really like this one, too, Manda. You're very good. I'm so glad you're sharing this stuff with us.

 

[manda]