Eva - the full set.

[tirediron]

So I finally completed the processing on the rest of set from Eva's shoot of last week. Comments/critique on the images or set as a work are welcome. This set was specifically shot to fill in some holes in her portfolio, so the poses may not appear to flow very well.
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[pgriz]

Very nice model, John! the one that bugs me is #4, where there a shadow to her nose's right that makes it look larger than it is. On the same shot, I would like liked to see a bit more fill, and her left side (our right) kinda plunges into darkness. In th last one (#7) the tone looks more yellowish than the others and slightly washed out.

 

[tirediron]

Good points! Thank-you.

 

[The_Traveler]

2,3,5,7 shoulders brighter than face
3 she is tilted back making her look fat
4 her face is dark and her shoulder is bright
6 her face is too plastic and the sweater so white it pulls my eyes
7 she looks preggers

sorry to be so curt but on my way somewhere.

 

[tirediron]

Thanks Lew!

 

[Big Mike]

Solid work.

I agree with Lew, the bright shoulders are a distraction, especially when it's mainly just bare arms contrasting against clothed body and darker background. A little bit of subtle dodging & burning can really help that.

One thing that bothers me, is that for all the make-up she has on...it looks like she barely ran a comb through her hair.

 

[tirediron]

Thanks Mike, much appreciated! Yes, I'm going to re-work some of those slightly; as for the hair, she had the most difficult hair I've ever come across; it was getting combed/adjusted pretty much between every shot and I still spent an ungodly amount of time getting rid of fly-aways and other stuff in post.