I think she looks angry in this pic, it definately looks like she wasnt impressed with me taking her picture....or maybe it was because I was playing with my new camera and not with her....maybe the look is jelousy, not anger
Maybe he is angry at the on camera flash. I am guessing, so spill some tech details. The effect in the eyes is interesting. I prefer softer light with more direction. Maybe try and crop out the wall on the right side of the frame.