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mmaria · Apr 13, 2016

MRnats · Apr 13, 2016

Great scenery and mood!

sscarmack · Apr 13, 2016

Holy location! Amazing

mmaria · Apr 13, 2016

MRnats said:
Great scenery and mood!

sscarmack said:
Holy location! Amazing

lol
Yeah, the fortress is great for shooting and available non stop, you just have to pay about a dollar to get in

Ty guys!

tirediron · Apr 13, 2016

WANT MORE!

JacaRanda · Apr 13, 2016

WHAT A LOCATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!

annamaria · Apr 13, 2016

Super location! Like the mood of this shot. Just curious where do you find your models?

frommrstomommy · Apr 13, 2016

gorgeous.

Trever1t · Apr 13, 2016

I thought it was a composite not realizing there really existed such a cool place! Composition is very cool, my only complaint is the blacks of her gown, no detail, at least not seen on my laptop.

DarkShadow · Apr 13, 2016

Studio7Four · Apr 14, 2016

There's a lot I like about this shot - the location, the tones. And the model facing away from the camera works well with the overall mood of the image.

I like that you didn't center the walkway in the frame, but (nitpicking) I feel the image is a bit too biased to the right. You have the walkway on the right half of the frame, and the building continues off the right side of the frame (and has a doorway or window off to the right of the walkway). All that could still work for me if the model hadn't been as far to the right as she is. Yes, I realize she's not actually that far off the center of the walkway where she is standing. But with the perspective of the sides of the walkway, the right wall disappears into her hip while, in the distance, you get to see essentially the full width of the walkway to the left of her, which over embellishes the feeling of imbalance. It all just combines to make me feel like my eyes are being pulled slightly off the right side of the frame. Had the tree on the left been a little more defined, or had the model been a bit to her left (maybe even just left of center in the walkway, but still well to the right of center in the frame) so that the far end of the walkway was more balanced around her I may have enjoyed the shot just a bit more.

Again, nitpicking, overall this is a very nice shot!

jcdeboever · Apr 14, 2016

Oh no, look out, mmaria has got her mojo in high gear... wonderful capture and presentation.

Excellent composition if you divide it up like @Tim Tucker does at times, very complex and intuitive. Well executed and advanced.

Didereaux · Apr 14, 2016

Really like the location, model, mood. But to frame and hang I think I would want the composition to be moved to the left about 10% and up about 5%. That would get rid of the odd stone /post/bulwark whatever on the left. It would move the model and the structure(rocky hilltop?)on the left in the distance on the hill almost equally on the 1/3 lines. Also it would put the model standing approx on the bottom 1/3 line.... I think then the composition would be museum/gallery ready! This is a good one, worth some extra effort imo.