Hi all, Recently did a shoot for a friend's family, who had a very photogenic young lady "C" who jumped right out of the camera for me. I know it's a tale as old as time, but this was the first commissioned shot I did and I was very happy with how it turned out. Having said that, I'd also love some critique on these. "B/N" - Bad positioning here resulting in blown out sky. I imagine Joe Public may not mind it, but I was curious what the reaction from this crowd is? "C/B" - Candid, not sure I love everything going on here, except that "C" manages to dominate the scene with those eyes and sort of makes me forget about the rest of this mess "C Lean" "Grass Bouquet" - I rather love this one, which is only strengthened by the fact I know C's mom was in the background telling her to put that grass down as I was snapping this picture I gained an appreciation on this shoot for who actively the parents need to be managed in order to get decent pics of the kids!!