Feedback on B+W images

[ChrisLarner]

Hi everyone,

Posting these 5 photographs that i have taken over the past month for some feedback for apart of my uni work

If you could give negative or positive feedback towards my photographs i would highly thankful for it because it helps me it out a lot.

Cheers
Chris


DSC_0517 by Cjl-photography, on Flickr

ISO 200
Focal Length 24mm
Aperture F16
Shutter Speed 20 seconds



DSC_0528 by Cjl-photography, on Flickr

ISO 200
Focal Length 40mm
Aperture F20
Shutter Speed 20seconds


DSC_0534 by Cjl-photography, on Flickr

ISO 200
Focal Length 24mm
Aperture F7.1
Shutter Speed 30 seconds


DSC_0559 by Cjl-photography, on Flickr

ISO 200
Focal Length 24mm
Aperture F20
Shutter Speeds 20 seconds


Manchester Arndale by Cjl-photography, on Flickr

ISO 200
Focal Length 24
Aperture F11
Shutter Speed 5seconds

 

[Spuzzette]

I'm not expert on B&W but I like them. Where were they taken?

 

[photo guy]

I do like these but the one thing I notice in all of them is the street lights seem to be making a weird star like look especially on #1 that is distracting and taking away from the building.

 

[JPmkV]

I like these a lot. Well done! :thumbup: :thumbup:
I'm guessing the streetlights look as they do due to the slow shutter speed, which is necessary to achieve the sharpness that these pictures have. I wouldn't change a thing.

 

[ChrisLarner]

hi thanks for the comments appreciate them guys,

The star effect from street lights i think is caused from aperture blades in lenses and long shutter speeds i think I'm not so sure!

thanks
chris

 

[tirediron]

Your conversions are well done.

 

[bazooka]

I agree with TI, the quality looks great, particularly the last one. The compositions leave something to be desired in #1, #2, and #4 in my opinion. However, I'm kind of biased against car light trails because they are usually done with little thought as to how they affect the composition.