Feedback on this quick shot.

[hrry]

Just taken this so i could play around with curves in editing, feedback appreciated.
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[AprilEye]

I think it would look better if her torch were not cut off and if you maybe didn't use a flash (??). The shadow behind her from the flash is just a bit distracting IMHO.

 

[hrry]

Okay cool, i only used flash because i couldn't be bothered getting my tripod out as it's pretty dark.
Thanks for feedback i am learning from this forum.

 

[AprilEye]

Okay cool, i only used flash because i couldn't be bothered getting my tripod out as it's pretty dark.
Thanks for feedback i am learning from this forum.

... i know right? I too am learning a ton!