Fence Line

[PixelRabbit]

Today on our way to pick up my prints I was focusing on fence lines, this is my favourite of the bunch.

Would love to hear your thoughts, thanks for taking a look!


Fence Line by Judi Smelko, on Flickr

 

[greybeard39 12]

makes me feel the way a warm wind does. very nice

 

[pgriz]

That has "win" all over it.

 

[Mike Lamb]

It has nice feel and color. I would crop the bottom so the dark area is more center.

 

[coffeefilter]

It has nice feel and color. I would crop the bottom so the dark area is more center.

I like where it is, because three major lines in the photo meet up with each other, alternating directions, and occur in about equidistant sections. There is a lot of symmetry in this photo, and it's very satisfying to me.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

It has nice feel and color. I would crop the bottom so the dark area is more center.

I like where it is, because three major lines in the photo meet up with each other, alternating directions, and occur in about equidistant sections. There is a lot of symmetry in this photo, and it's very satisfying to me.

I'm on the fence here.

But I am tipping towards losing a bit off the bottom.
I think it has more to do with it being almost square, but not quite.
Conversely, I'd like a little off the left to make it square.

 

[minicoop1985]

It's like photo impressionism. Very nicely done. I like the leading lines, the swirl, but I do agree about cropping a bit off the bottom.

 

[WesternGuy]

PR, this is very nice - an impressionistic photo blur. I do think that I agree with cropping a bit off the bottom.

WesternGuy

 

[annamaria]

I like the warm feeling the photo conveys, and agree with the bottom cropping. Definitely nice work.

 

[keyseddie]

Don't crop it little bunny. The lower left corner has that rush of relatively straight lines that leads the viewer into the composition. If you continue on, this is the type of thing you learn to recognize if you train in the arts. I like the way you use your toys.

 

[Dagwood56]

I like it as is, but agree that a bit cropped off the bottom would make it even better.

 

[Designer]

I hope you don't mind my fooling with it. I thought it needed a flip and a tilt. Line in a composition tends to be more positive if it rises to the right, and by placing more of the dark mass lower in the frame, it tends to stabilize the composition. The crop was only to square it off after tilting.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Nah. You took far, far too much away.

 

[Tiller]

I like it as is PR. Wouldn't crop at all. Nice work

 

[FanBoy]

Beautiful original shot. As commented, the edit took too much texture and openness.