As I pointed out last week, the How to Post to TPF pictorial guide done in 2007 needed to be updated to reflect how to post from sites other than Photobucket.
horrible shadows, lovely ceiling, bunch of sweaty shouters.
Do you want me to be constructive as well?
Get the flash off the camera, sync slow and second curtain. I can see that the ambient light comprises one or perhaps two candles, now if you'd had 4, now we'd be talking! So expectations of available light peak of the action aren't really present. Despite my professed leanings.
#4 from the top is pick for this selection, personally I would have gone with an 85 wide open, I see you like that 35, no accounting for taste