-I think B&W works better than color, but only because the white balance is off. With better WB, I think I would like the color more.
-The way the legs are posed that there is just one leg shadow isn't good. If you reversed the pose so the the viewer's left leg was forwards, it would have kept the shadows seperate, which I think would look better.
-I think the light is too hard in general.
The thought on this shot was I'd seen some like this (done better of course) on the net and had it in the back of my mind to try this - she was the first since I thought of the pose. It was also late in the evening, and it was a spur of the moment thing that hit me. A shot I wanted to try but didn't really prepare for, and the sun was going down quickly.
Next one will be better planned.
-You mention coming away with over 500 shots. But don't think like that, I think people get too wrapped up in how many pictures they took, as if that has anything to do with how many good ones there are. You see it all the time with wedding photographers that say thing like, "You'll get over 1500 images!". They might not be any better (probably worse) than the guy who delivers 150 images, except that they deliver 1350 more images that aren't as good as the first 150. It's just more garbage. The only thing that ever matters is how many good images got made. No one cares if you shot 500 images and got 15 good ones, or if you shot 50 images and got 20 good ones. The final count is all that matters.
I'm still in the very experimental mode, so for every one pose, I probably took five shots (or more) with different focal lengths, sometimes playing with dof, etc. Told her we'd probably get about 10-15 decent shots out of it.
-I have to agree with the others. She is pretty mannish. And the the hard side light and very shadowed face sure don't help. And also...
-The hand pose doesn't help either. Her hands are a bit manly to begin with, but the pose of them is no where near feminine. I understand that you're trying to cover her boobs with something, but if I saw a crop of just the chest and hands, I would think there was a guy standing behind her, groping her breasts.
It would be very 'tacky' of me also to call her out on her looks here, but I never said I don't see the 'mannish' look she has. This is a hobby, but I've been paid by a few people (so far they're happy) and as you stated, do I turn down someone because of her looks? Like I said earlier, she was happy with the results, so NOW my issue is how do I deal with some of those features (some caused by me not lighting properly, some by nature!).
Is it my responsibility to make her look the way I THINK she should, or throw them out there with usual editing.
I'm sure there will be more 'clients' like this, so my goal with this post was to see if anyone has suggestions on how to either avoid this in the future (other than declining the job), or how to deal with it.
And I guess my 'fine art' attempt failed. No problem, I'll keep trying. But THAT'S why I posted and asked for opinions.