First attempt at B&W c&c please

[MissCream]

This is my first attempt editing in B&W, I edited so much today that I've lost all concept of what looks good or bad... This is my son being burped and falling asleep. I think these were shot in auto which I'm not proud of but (insert whatever excuse makes me seem less pathetic here). I'm not sure if there is too much grey in the pics or not, I also am aware that they are a bit soft and a lot noisy (my living room has little light)...

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[ann]

on my monitor there is too much contrast. Back off as babies don't need to have a hard edge look at least imho

 

[o hey tyler]

Yeah, get some photos of the baby getting choked out. Those are keepers.

 

[MissCream]

I thought they looked too dull in the original, I'll tone it down, thanks.. I'm over tired and my eyes aren't functioning properly but thats what you get with a 2 week old around

 

[...take the shot!]

It a baby getting choked...but in a nice way. lol.

I like #2.