First attempt at Self-Portrait looky looky :)

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Here is my first self-portrait..some intial comments i have gotten is the feeling of it is dark and scary but thats what I was shooting for.

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you may want to post a slightly smaller version... some of our screens arent quite big enough to see the whole thing at once. but as i already told you, it looks good!
 
I think thats better now (resized)
 
commetns plzz I hate how if you dont have a catchy thread names you dont get replies haha.
 
you're preaching to the choir my friend!
 
Creating any new thread is a game of roulette on whether you get comments or not so don't take it personally.

My initial thought was "oh man, fungi!" I love all of your processing EXCEPT the kind of greeny-blue hue between the deep shadows and the lit part of your face. My eyes kind of get stuck there. Otherwise looks good and very 'creepy' :)
 
To get lots of comments and folks looking at you pic, you need to put something about porn in the title, seems to work for some here LOL
 
worked for me... but then theres the shame...
 
I'm with Brittany on this one: I do like how you make your eyes shine, and I like the harsh shadows, but I am not fond of the colouring of your skin, least of all where light meets shadow. "Funghi" is a nice word ... "mildew/mould" springs to mind, too. :oops:
 
Nice cross-processing. Reminds me of x-files, except where are the aliens?
 
I really like where the light hits your face and neck, I don't mind the alternative colouring; what I'm not favouring is the white background.. I think it would be a little more intriguing with a black\darker background. Normally I like white but it's just not working for me?
 
You could be the official photographer to serial killers ;)
Its nice...scary but nice :D
 
haha your comments make me laugh because my self-portrait seems to scare most poeple I show it to.

I really like where the light hits your face and neck, I don't mind the alternative colouring; what I'm not favouring is the white background.. I think it would be a little more intriguing with a black\darker background. Normally I like white but it's just not working for me?

Hey if I could afford another $50 roll of black or gray paper I would buy it :)...I think for what I had it worked out well but thanks for the suggestion.
 
gray and black paper are just differently lit pieces of white paper.... for a shot like this, you dont really even need paper in my opinion, shoot in front of a dark room or something ... if you want. lol

now go by that a700!
 
It is extremely hard to make a white backdrop black in my opinion especially when you are using stobes. I can see that if your in your bathroom with the lights off and u shoot some light at you face you might get that effect.

I was intially trying to do a business portrait of myself but it changed directions lol
 

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