First Outdoor Shoot - CC Please

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My first outdoor shoot and seperating of colors with PS ... please CC, but be nice lol:

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I don't like how the background is B&W. this is so 90's. It also seems out of focus or blurry. Composition is nice as is the pose. Maybe retouch her underarm to get rid of that "crease."
 
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Thx Joey ... yah color scheme is pretty outdated ... but the girl requested ... thannks for the feedback tho
 

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You didn't do a very good job at masking around the fingers. If you used Photoshop try the pen tool and use a soft brush ;)
 

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its a good job masking the fingers yes. i like to edit in quick mask mode, then make a selection. once that is done then i blur the edges. it works well for me.
 

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selective color :(

that hand position is extremely akward to me.

i also agree that the whole image is a bit soft.
 

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that b&w background really kills it for me. =/
 

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edit your post saying that the selective colour was the client's request. Haha, else you'll just keep getting the same response.
 

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