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[tylerford1213]

I am just looking for some feedback from others. I am 22 years old and have been doing photography for about 7 years and I have never had and real feedback. this is one of my favorite photos I have taken. let me know what you think!

 

[tirediron]

This is what I refer to as a 'personal image' that is one which has significant meaning to you because you know and/or have a relationship with the person(s) in the image. From a technical point of view, as an objective observer, I see inaccurate white balance, fly-away hair, a cluttered background and an image that would have been better composed in portrait (vertical) orientation. That's not to say that it's a bad picture, because since it has meaning for you, it has positive attributes, BUT... when viewed by someone who has no connection with the subjects, it does lack.

 

[tylerford1213]

thank you, I completely understand the 'personal image' thank you very much for your feedback!

 

[Gary A.]

This is what I refer to as a 'personal image' that is one which has significant meaning to you because you know and/or have a relationship with the person(s) in the image. From a technical point of view, as an objective observer, I see inaccurate white balance, fly-away hair, a cluttered background and an image that would have been better composed in portrait (vertical) orientation. That's not to say that it's a bad picture, because since it has meaning for you, it has positive attributes, BUT... when viewed by someone who has no connection with the subjects, it does lack.

+1 (Hey, you're good at this feedback stuff. I've been watching you. lol)

 

[tylerford1213]

haha thanks, like I said I have never had feedback from anyone. everything helps good or bad im just here to take in as much as I possibly can

 

[Rick50]

Yup, I think tirediron nailed it. Can't improve on that.