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[oceridwanudin]

Hi guys im new member in this forum,nice to meet to you..Plz give me some advices,i wanna be a pro photographer like you guys

My camera setting
70-200mm iS f2.8 1/640 iso 100 with HSS

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[peterogof]

Hi guys im new member in this forum,nice to meet to you..Plz give me some advices,i wanna be a pro photographer like you guys

My camera setting
70-200mm iS f2.8 1/640 iso 100 with HSS

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Nice shot


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[Donde]

Well she looks a little dark on my screen but the pose and composition are very nice.

 

[mrpink]

I would suggest some localized dodging on the model. Maybe clone out the plant growing behind one of the pillars on the bridge.



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[goooner]

Better than I would have done, nice shot. It does look a tad cool on my un-calibrated monitor though. Might be your style though.

 

[tirediron]

Agree that WB is definitely a bit on the cool side. The subject is under-exposed as a result of (I assume; can't access EXIF data) your use of evaluation en metering. The camera was fooled by the bright, white area above the model. Spot-metering would have helped here.

 

[Granddad]

Welcome to the forum. I like the shot a lot but agree with what everyone else has said, ie, it's a little dark and cool for my taste (and the coolness IS a matter of taste).

I had a go at it in Lightroom and painted in exposure (+.48) WB (+10) and a little clarity (+10) to the lovely young lady then cloned out the extra plant/weed in the wall next to her.

Unfortunately you don't say in your profile whether or not you allow others to edit your photos so I can't share my version without your permission.

 

[Gary A.]

Welcome to the forum. I echo others on the image being on the dark side. I also think there is too much on top. The bright building directly behind the subject competes for the viewer's attention. Cropping from the top will help minimize this distraction and make the subject more prominent in the frame.

 

[oceridwanudin]

A pleasure to meet you guys and Thank you for all your feedback @peterogof @Donde @mrpink @gooner @tirediron @garya. @grandad

I hope i'll get better in the next shot not to under exposure or maybe lil bit edit with lightroom..

@grandad oh i'll turn on setting allo other to edit,cause i didn't know. Im not familiar yet for this app




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[oceridwanudin]

Welcome to the forum. I like the shot a lot but agree with what everyone else has said, ie, it's a little dark and cool for my taste (and the coolness IS a matter of taste).

I had a go at it in Lightroom and painted in exposure (+.48) WB (+10) and a little clarity (+10) to the lovely young lady then cloned out the extra plant/weed in the wall next to her.

Unfortunately you don't say in your profile whether or not you allow others to edit your photos so I can't share my version without your permission.

i'm using the photo forum app for iphone. I didn't find the setting that allow others to edit my pic.. could help me,plz?


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[Granddad]

I don't know anything about iPhone apps but I do know that phone apps often have restricted options, you'll probably need to access your profile from your main machine to do that. However, since you've said it's OK here it is. Not a lot of changes, just minor adjustments that make a difference. Others might see it differently.