First post, some photos from today. C&C please

[bradh]

Im Brad, im a photography major. Here are some of my shots from today.

 

[Eventer]

Wow those are all awesome! i really love the 3rd one down

 

[anm90]

I think 2 and 4 have the most potential. I think a slightly different angle would have worked better for #2, and I would like to see some more color and better lighting with #4. For #2, I think the white things on the left (trash bags?) are kind of distracting. I do love the sky in #2 though. What time of day were you shooting at?

 

[bradh]

Thanks for the comments, anm90 thanks for the advice i have multiple shots of both but number 4 was right before the sun was going down so lighting was scarce and i was also getting tired and lazy haha. Also the white things along the structure are huge white pieces of plastic that i guess these things were wrapped in, they are a bit distracting but they were filled with disgusting water, broken glass, and who knows what else. I was shooting these between 4 and 6 oclock in afternoon

 

[bazooka]

I like #2 but the lens softness on the edges is distracting and, in this instance and in my opinion, degrades the image.

The distortion on #3 works well with the image I think.

The other shots lack interest for me.

 

[bradh]

Thanks, yeah i realized after i started editing these they were very soft around the image which came from me shooting at a very wide angle

 

[o hey tyler]

The shots are decently composed, and the lighting could use some adjustments in some spots. But I'd really focus on getting rid of that lens. The distortion sticks out like a sore thumb in every photo. What are you using for a lens so I know to not buy that one?

 

[Stamp]

The shots are decently composed, and the lighting could use some adjustments in some spots. But I'd really focus on getting rid of that lens. The distortion sticks out like a sore thumb in every photo. What are you using for a lens so I know to not buy that one?

+1 :thumbup:

 

[KKJUN]

these look pretty cool, seems like an awesome place to shoot at. Am I right that you're using a wide-angle-converter?

 

[mommy22]

Are these done with a fish eye lense or a wide angle? They are interesting.

 

[bradh]

Cheap Fisheye adaptor FTL! Thats the reasoning behind all the soft edges. Thanks for all the C&C