First shoot For c&c (hopefully a little better selection)

[Matt24138]

I posted up a few photos last night and I see some of the errors. So I am posting another angle of the boardwalk with better angle and a second photo for color and placement as that is what I was thinkimg of when I took the shot.

1.

first shoot 023 by Misfit0138, on Flickr

2.

first shoot 098 by Misfit0138, on Flickr

 

[Matt24138]

Are they that bad? I guess everyone is knocked out by the ugliness?

 

[silentanathema]

The angle of the first one is good to me, but the colors are kinda blah, its just kinda boring. Try going back at sunrise or sunset or maybe if there is a cool storm or somthing off in the distance.
The second one is really well in focused but its seems just a little blown out in places. I don't know if getting more of the flower in would help or if cutting off the the petels doesn't matter for this photo. Keep up the good work

 

[Matt24138]

I am a single dad so I literally had to run outside for 20min while he was napping. I plan on catching the first one when I have a better environment. I wish there wasnt a 5 step drop at the end so I could have had the ocean in the background.