I think these were shot with continuous lighting and that is why they are soft
1/60 is not fast enough at 80mm if it had been flash you would have been ok
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Oh... I bet you're presuming this was shot hand-held. It took me a minute to figure out what you're suggesting. I typically shoot at 1/60 in the studio... and down to 1/15 outdoors, but ALWAYS on a tripod.
To the OP: This image is plenty sharp. In fact, if it were any sharper you'd like it less.
Portraiture is not medical photography. It's usually not a good thing to achieve absolute reality, as most of us need some help in our appearance. A bit of softening helps so much with skin texture, hair (Her hair is wreck by the way. Watch for those stray hair coming onto her neck.), and contrast.
I bit warmer would be nice too. Again, you're not going so much for reality as for something flattering.
The light ratio (main:fill) could be a wee bit greater. The position of the hair light bothers me more. Move it a bit so it falls more on the same side as the main and not straight down on her. I wouldn't position the fill any lower. It's fine where it is and will only cause problems with her lenses if lower.
And the clothing is out of key. Consider using a deeper background when working with deep colored clothing.
All-in-all, I think you did fine for your first go at it.
-Pete