First time shooting a Model

cardonalj · Jul 17, 2012

So I had to opportunity today to be a second shooter of sorts to a fellow photographer on his Model shoot today in Coney Island. I've never shot a model so this was all new to me. Below are a few of the ones *I* personally liked from the ones I took. any comments, recommendations, critiques, etc would be greatly appreciated.

Model 9 by LJCPhotos, on Flickr

Model 14 by LJCPhotos, on Flickr

Model 19 by LJCPhotos, on Flickr

Model 25 by LJCPhotos, on Flickr

The rest can be viewed on my flickr page. Flickr: LJCPhotos' Photostream

slackercruster · Jul 17, 2012

#1...and those legs!

Good work!

edit...some nice ones at your site... Raul!!!!

cardonalj · Jul 17, 2012

Thanks!

PinkDoor · Jul 17, 2012

Suggestion! Move to *professional* gallery. Woot woot! Love these!

Derrel · Jul 17, 2012

SMOKIN HOT!@!

GACK!

Jaemie · Jul 18, 2012

#4 FTW. What an angle and framing! That's splendid. Perhaps try bringing up the blue saturation on her dress a speck. Also, I'd crop out the sky and stray architecture. Something like this:

Derrel · Jul 18, 2012

Nice edit Jaemie! Cropping off that bald,white sky REALLY improved the focus of the picture (no pun intended).

Jaemie · Jul 18, 2012

Thanks

Sw1tchFX · Jul 18, 2012

cardonalj said:

Without a doubt (aside from the hand being cut off) this is the best one in the series. This is a good picture.

Jaemie · Jul 18, 2012

Sw1tchFX said:
Without a doubt (aside from the hand being cut off) this is the best one in the series. This is a good picture.

Can you elaborate, please, about what makes this the best image in the series? Maybe I'm missing something; while I like this photo, I can't find anything about it that makes me go "wow."