first wedding C&C please

[photofreak87]

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[SlimPaul]

I think since it's a wedding you covered, you should show us a few more photos. Doesn't the first photo look better in color? I think weddings should be bright and colorful rather than gray

 

[cauzimme]

My favorite is the first, but I find it too soft, try the sharpen tool in photoshop I'm sure it would improve your picture. Keep the good work!

Edit: Like SlimPaul said, show us a little more photo.

 

[EOS_JD]

No1 needs a little more contrast. I'm not keen on the grooms facial expression or the brides pose in the second - she looks all hunched up. As said show more