First Wedding, C & C please:)

tbc · Aug 26, 2012

I am an Amateur Photog. I had been practice and second shoot wedding with a Pro Wedding Photographer in my area for few wedding. This is the first wedding that I was Official Photographer. Time a a bit rush for the formal shots, and I think I still need to improve my skills a lot. I am dreaming to become a Pro Wedding Photographer in future. Let me know how I did and what to need to improve

I know I should post more photo but this is yesterday wedding and so far I just has these done PP.

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Thank you

ewick · Aug 26, 2012

IMO I think you should focus on composition. For me the only one I liked was the one that is gray scale.

PhotoWrangler · Aug 26, 2012

I think you 2nd shooting experience is apparent, as these are all nicely done. A few things could be improved, but keep gaining experience as a 2nd shooter and you'll do fine.

tbc · Aug 26, 2012

ewick said:
IMO I think you should focus on composition. For me the only one I liked was the one that is gray scale.

I know!! That's what I thought too. Will definitely be careful with the composition next time.

ChristopherCoy said:
I think you 2nd shooting experience is apparent, as these are all nicely done. A few things could be improved, but keep gaining experience as a 2nd shooter and you'll do fine.

Thanks Chris, I will try to get more improvement and keep shooting

manaheim · Aug 26, 2012

7 was nice.

Lots of composition issues... Heads centered in frame, accidental tilts, etc. You did capture some nice emotions and moments though. It's not all bad... But it's not good, either.

I recommend a lot more time as secondary and read up on composition. Also spend time looking at some other wedding photographers work to get some ideas.

Wedding photography is TOUGH. I'm a good photographer... Possibly even quite good. But I'm "decent" at best at weddings, and I've shot like 15 of them as secondary. Keep at it.

tbc · Aug 26, 2012

manaheim said:
7 was nice.

Lots of composition issues... Heads centered in frame, accidental tilts, etc. You did capture some nice emotions and moments though. It's not all bad... But it's not good, either.

I recommend a lot more time as secondary and read up on composition. Also spend time looking at some other wedding photographers work to get some ideas.

Wedding photography is TOUGH. I'm a good photographer... Possibly even quite good. But I'm "decent" at best at weddings, and I've shot like 15 of them as secondary. Keep at it.

I know, the Pro Photographer that I work for said my composition need a lot more Improvement. I would hope that he would give me more opportunity to work behind him and learn from it. Thanks for the C & C

BDembowski · Aug 27, 2012

your exposures are fantastic, but i agree with comments from earlier about composition. remember its not just the way that the people are placed but also everything in the frame.

tbc · Aug 27, 2012

BDembowski said:
your exposures are fantastic, but i agree with comments from earlier about composition. remember its not just the way that the people are placed but also everything in the frame.

Thanks for C&C

I have another wedding coming up this Sunday, will definitely be careful with the composition