I'm kinda digging the new groove that you are in. I like all the color and lines you found. The only thing that bothers me a little is the OOF taking up a little bit too much room on the right. Keep shooting these...they are fun to look at!
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I see what you mean on the OOF part. It was a very small fixture so I was trying to keep distractions out of the frame. Moving up and to the left wouldn't have worked as well compositionally, but was clearly what was called for to avoid the lower right.
So I've been thinking about this remark by you all day, and I challenge you to explain your remarks.
What do you mean by trying to hard? How do you mean "find yourself"? What in what I have done here (or not done here) suggests to you that I have somehow not?
To me these remarks seem very cursory, and where you are one artist of note around here these remarks feel sort of glib.