Flower arrangement

[Borisek]

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[tirediron]

Processing tends to be a personal and subjective thing; composition on the other hand, rather less so. In this case, i think the composition really falls short. Not only is the background rather busy and distracting, you have the back of someone at the end of the "path" formed by the most in-focus blooms. If this is a potted plant, try moving it to another location, and if it's immovable, consider shooting from a different angle to minimize the background distractions.

 

[Fujidave]

On this time I have to agree with John.

 

[Jeff1548 48]

Not so good this time......

 

[Borisek]

Thanks for your comments, but I am doing my best at the moment and I am stil learning.


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[bogeyguy]

What are you trying to accomplish?

 

[tirediron]

...t I am doing my best at the moment and I am stil learning.

Understood; that's the point of critique; NOT to call attention to perceived flaws in your work, but rather to bring to your attention things that you might not have considered and to give you food for thought.

 

[Borisek]

...t I am doing my best at the moment and I am stil learning.

Understood; that's the point of critique; NOT to call attention to perceived flaws in your work, but rather to bring to your attention things that you might not have considered and to give you food for thought.

I was aware of what you said, but I didn’t know how to change it. On the other photo app I have, I get many likes and positive comments for this picture. [emoji846]


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