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Graeme

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Love your thoughts on this one.

I like the shot but keep coming back to it because I feel it could be better somehow.
 
This is a farily good use of lines, but I think maybe just a little different angle might help this one. Try showing the path a bit more. The one thing that is distracting for me is the metal fence turning to wood fencing. Maybe crop it out. This is a tough one, I like it and look forward to seeing any changes you do make to it.
 
Here is another on which shows more of the footpath but is minus the foreground flowers and where the metal fence is less pronounced
 

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Personally, I like the 2nd one better, but both could use a bit more saturation, contrast, and sharpness. I think it is mainly sharpness that is keeping you wondering about the pictures :)
 
yeah I like the last version! Neat colours! and I like how the very far background pops up here
 

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