from my friend's lawn

[kaymlo]

I'm not crazy about the bright sky in the upper left corner, but I couldn't find a good way to crop it since I prefer the width of the shot as it is.

Comments/critique if you please.

 

[AF44]

i really like the crispness of this macro. if you want me to edit out the bright sky in the corner I can but your photos 'are not ok to edit' so i wont untill you give me the thumbs up.

other than that, ascetically pleasing, nice shot!

 

[Scruff McGruff]

I don't mind the bright sky, it even (just barely) makes the photo more dynamic via the implied direction of the light. If it were me, I might even include more of the sky.

Bear in mind I am a total noob.

Still, great shot!

 

[kaymlo]

Thanks AF and Scruff for the comments.

AF44 I'd be happy to see what you can do with the shot - thanks!

 

[AF44]

here is my rendition with a nice mona lisa altered horizon

 

[kaymlo]

AF44 that is perfect! Exactly what I was looking for. Wish I could pull that off Thank you.

 

[AF44]

just get photoshop and take a little time to learn it haha... that actually is a pretty crappy job as far as photoshop goes, but thanks for the compliment

 

[Jaymz77]

I love the shot, although it would be nice to see the entire flower/weed..

 

[kaymlo]

Thanks Jay, yeah I wish I'd taken a few more shots, I didn't even know what this one looked like until I got it on my computer.