Ft. Delaware

[MrPants]

Hey, y'all!

I recently switched over to film photography and have been feeling more and more comfortable every time I go out. I'm fairly new to photography in general, so any critique is much appreciated!

These are from a trip I took with my dad to Delaware City.

Shot on Ektar100 (only editing is to the one black and white image [cropping and color to b&w])

 

[MrPants]

Any tips, mayhaps?

 

[The_Traveler]

If you discount that this is film, what would you say about the pictures.

 

[MrPants]

I feel like I get into the habit of guiding the viewer's eye from left-to-right (I've noticed it in other photos too), and I don't want anything to get stale or feel repetitive, but, at the same time, these are still the shots that attract my eye.

 

[The_Traveler]

That's probably because you and the rest of the Western world spends their lives reading from left to right.

 

[MrPants]

That is true. I'd like to try (maybe as a fun exercise) taking a shot that catches my eye first, and then trying to pull something completely different out of the scene that I normally wouldn't think about at first glance.

 

[Empiric]

Some of them are awesome, completely digging the BW one.

 

[mmaria]

#5 is my favorite

have no time for c&c right now, but someone else will say something for sure