fun shoot with my roomate and his bf!

[ghache]

haha yeah, well she got thin eyebrows.

 

[RMThompson]

I'll make a few comments.

The first picture has some good composition but the underwear, both upper and lower, ruin it. Tell them either do it without it or don't do it at all. (Sort of like models holding their boobs; unnatural and never looks good!)

Why is she pulling down his pants and looking at us with a rather bored look on her face? Why is his underwear ridiculously green?

Only 2 and 5 habe any GENUINE emotion, and it shows.

 

[FattyMcJ]

one thing that bothers the hell out of me, :gah: are her eyebrows! :madmad:

Or lack thereof...


But other than that, well done OP! :thumbup:

 

[HoboSyke]

The first one is awesome. Very nice contrast and exposure. She has a nice butt to as well

 

[imchristinak]

the first picture is pretty nice. not digging the undie though. should remain under the jeans imo.

 

[Corvphotography]

i love 1 and 3. it shows they are in love but shows they don't take things TOO serious. i really like em.

 

[Pea-Pod]

My Favorites are 1 and 2, I can understand why shed get the one blown up, turned out really nice

 

[Markw]

#6...NSFW!

:mrgreen:
:thumbsup:

 

[cdnaiphoto]

Why is 1 trashy and 7 is not?

These are great btw...just wondering

 

[DanFinePhotography]

nice shots, i really like 1, 2 and 4 :thumbup: