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Oh wow! That is such an awesome idea. I really really like where you're going with this!
I reckon if you got rid of those things in the top right corner and sort of created a bit of black stufff beneath the boat it'd looks really cool.
 

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Really nice capture of an interesting reflection. I like the horizontal ripples that paint the ship in horizontal lines. But I can't get past the objects (pylons?) in the upper right -- looks like the shot is upside down.

I think I'd prefer seeing both the ship & its reflection, but that's just me.
 

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Cool idea!! love the rippled reflection! i find the things in the upper corner distracting too. i just dont get that part i guess, because you would have gotten rid of them if you wanted to, right?
 
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Thank you all for your comments :)

Yes, the "things" could be avoided but I tried to leave a link to a real thing not a reflection so the picture is not "pure" per se. I'll try to post an edited version (when the site I usually put my photos accepts new pictures after some problem) with the edited out poles for you to judge, which you personally find better :).
 
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