Girls that Double park

[BananaRepublic]

Hi,

I wonder if I could get some feedback on this image. I have entered it into my camera clubs monthly challenge. The theme of the comp is still life, I'm not into taking shots of fruit I'm into cars so that explains to thought processes, sort of.

Any who I'd like some FB to offer a few rebuttals or if I should bring a hat.

FYI the title is deliberately embellished, this is a numbers game after all.

Thanks

 

[weepete]

I like it. I think its a pretty cool concept and only have two things I'd nitpick about. First is that it would have been cool to have more of a reflection of the mini (but I like reflections) that is no biggie though just my preference. Second is the black kerb line top RHS draws my attention too much.

I love the curve in the double yellow lines.

 

[timor]

Cool.

 

[BananaRepublic]

I like it. I think its a pretty cool concept and only have two things I'd nitpick about. First is that it would have been cool to have more of a reflection of the mini (but I like reflections) that is no biggie though just my preference. Second is the black kerb line top RHS draws my attention too much.

I love the curve in the double yellow lines.

I was a bit disappointed with the curb afterwards but if I attempted to remove it i would also lose the curve in the line, there was more of a curve toward the rear.
I don't have PS at mo so could only do some minor cropping / straightening. I did not think of the the reflection angle luckily the scene is outside my door and the mini is on the shelf.

Regards