Just my attempt to be slightly creative while still developing my photographic eye and possibly some technique. (This image is untouched, straight from the card)
bokeh is usually the subject is in focus, and the rest is heavily OOF. also, the better bok... bokehs?...boki..? IDK, plural for bokeh :3 have had lights of some kind in the our of focus areas resulting in that almost blown glowing circle thingies. Jewler why dont you rephrase what I just said into something workable
I think that if you had of some sort of object in focus in the foreground (obviously)then the bokeh would have been nice and not just looked like an oof picture! Keep trying!!