Graffiti C&C plz

FranDaMan · Jan 30, 2011

Behind our trainstation is an old building that should be demolished.
Graffiti artists use it for their Canvas.

1.

The source by Francis de Beus, on Flickr

2.

Graffiti by Francis de Beus, on Flickr

3.

Graffiti by Francis de Beus, on Flickr

4.

Graffiti by Francis de Beus, on Flickr

5.

Graffiti by Francis de Beus, on Flickr

FranDaMan · Jan 31, 2011

a bump cuz forum is back up.
Some C&C plz ?

LuckySe7en · Jan 31, 2011

I like #1 the best. As a former graff artist, it tells a story.

FranDaMan · Jan 31, 2011

Thank you. It was only after taking shots of the pieces that I saw that little container with the spraybottles.

Karri · Jan 31, 2011

#1, 2 and 5 look a little underexposed to me although it works for the tone in #1. I dislike the branch in #1 - I think it takes away from the focus of the picture. #1 and 2 are probably my favorites. #3 doesn't do much for me, it seems a bit too angled and not enough of a subject. #4 isn't that interesting to me... #5 I like more because I like the raggedness and grittiness of the bottom of the wall with the boards and grass but I wish there was more graffiti on the wall. I think it could be an interesting shoot but bring out more things that 'pop' and tell a story better like #1. Otherwise, it ends up kind of like shooting the graffiti with no substance. #2-5 seem like they are centered too so mix it up more with the rule of thirds (you could crop off some of the right hand side of #2).