Welcome to the forum! You did a great job of catching the duck liftoff. I like almost the vertical leap. The out of focus ducks in the foreground are rather distracting. Perhaps a different crop might help some. To me it also looks like the whites are a little hot... I might have a play with it and see..
I just wanted to give the OP an example. I personally think it is too high in frame, but I wanted to leave the water splatter intact.. as you can probably tell I used content aware fill to get rid of a duck head