Heartpatrick Portraits - Vivien in Centrio

[heartpatrick]

Hi All,

Sharing some pics from a recent portrait shoot.

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Pic 8:

The full album is available here:
Heartpatrick People 99 - Vivien Lim in ?????


Thanks all.



Heartpatrick
Heartpatrick: Design, Travel, Photography

 

[manaheim]

I often like your stuff, but in most of these there is too much other stuff and not enough of her. She's underexposed in 2. I quite like 5.

 

[tirediron]

Agree with ^^ that ^^; this seems to lack the impact of many of your earlier shoots.

 

[BrickHouse]

I like 2,3,7,8. They seem more comfortable.

 

[NedM]

These are great, I love the feel the photos give off!

 

[Nevermore1]

I think these are great if she is just an "add-in". If they are supposed to be of her I would expect to see some better views/angles of her face. Did she specifically request that her face not be fully shown?

 

[heartpatrick]

haha thanks all for your comment. i guess i have intended for this set to be an environmental portrait, taking care to balance exposure of the interesting soho environment with the model.

 

[Gavjenks]

7 is too harshly lit. Same shot on a cloudy day or with better fill would be quite good, like the pose.
2 is way underexposed
4 not digging the weird voyeur vibe from the plant, makes it feel creepy instead of carefree.




5 I think is definitely the best. Good lighting, decent focus on the subject without too much clutter, cool lines and balance. Then #1 for certain uses. Then #3 (though it looks a bit dark gray and green, easy to address in PP if desired)

 

[hotdrop]

Like everyone else I like #5. If you were selling a bunch of lamps I would use that shot.