help me improve this concept!

[volleysnap]

I really like the idea we came up with, I just need some ideas on how to make it better. We were shooting in pretty low light so the first thing I plan on fixing when we retry it is the exposure. I want to make it look more surreal/natural as well. Any thoughts? Thanks in advance

http://www.flickr.com/photos/signejb/2548764372/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/signejb/2547937637/in/photostream/

 

[MyaLover]

Can you find an open field? one with no trees

 

[Sw1tchFX]

Strobes, strobes, strobes.

Get the background about a stop and a half darker then the subject and it will look more interesting. You can also shoot in broad daylight if you do that, not nighttime.

 

[volleysnap]

thanks for the ideas! sadly, no open fields within close range :/

 

[tirediron]

Shoot wide open with your 1.4, blur the background