I like alot of your photos and i think you are heading in the right direction (meaning that you are improving). I am a noob and I dont know if you do any post processing but i find it helps me in creating a better looking picture and also it helps me try to take better pictures next time i shoot. Because in post processing alot of times i see where better light or a certain something would have set the picture off. I dont know if it is okay to edit your photos so i am going out on a limb here to give you an ideal. I took your friends photo and did some small touch up on it. I am in no way saying she needs it. You are both very attractive. So here is your photo toched up. Let me know if you dont approve and i will delete it and apologize. signed Randall