Here's one from a shoot I did last night. C&C welcomed as always.


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Interesting... there's a couple of things that I'm not quite sure of. One is the background; the blue bricks are fine, but then there's tree and plain old white/concrete bricks which doesn't quite work for me. Her pose also seems a little strained; I think you could have done some great reclining stuff with those "chairs". It also seems a little skewed, perspective-wise.
I have a few more angles of the shot as well as a few leaning back like you said. I just took a break from going through pix and took one to final.
I think your editing is almost too clean for this shot. I think you might need to take a more creative edge to it to bring it all together.
Love her hair and outfit. Cute model.

Hate the hands. Too over-the-top garish.

The color and processing are nice.
Couple of things bother me. One is the light, it just looks very unnatural. The other is the framing with the dirt adn trees in the picture. I think if you could have her, the hand and the wall in the frame only it'd be 300% improved right there.

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