Here's one from a shoot I did last night. C&C welcomed as always.

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Interesting... there's a couple of things that I'm not quite sure of. One is the background; the blue bricks are fine, but then there's tree and plain old white/concrete bricks which doesn't quite work for me. Her pose also seems a little strained; I think you could have done some great reclining stuff with those "chairs". It also seems a little skewed, perspective-wise.
 
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I have a few more angles of the shot as well as a few leaning back like you said. I just took a break from going through pix and took one to final.
 

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I think your editing is almost too clean for this shot. I think you might need to take a more creative edge to it to bring it all together.
 
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I put a very slight topaz filter on it.
 

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Love her hair and outfit. Cute model.

Hate the hands. Too over-the-top garish.

The color and processing are nice.
 

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Couple of things bother me. One is the light, it just looks very unnatural. The other is the framing with the dirt adn trees in the picture. I think if you could have her, the hand and the wall in the frame only it'd be 300% improved right there.
 

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