Here's one from a shoot I did last night. C&C welcomed as always.

[UnknownBro]

 

[tirediron]

Interesting... there's a couple of things that I'm not quite sure of. One is the background; the blue bricks are fine, but then there's tree and plain old white/concrete bricks which doesn't quite work for me. Her pose also seems a little strained; I think you could have done some great reclining stuff with those "chairs". It also seems a little skewed, perspective-wise.

 

[UnknownBro]

I have a few more angles of the shot as well as a few leaning back like you said. I just took a break from going through pix and took one to final.

 

[kathyt]

I think your editing is almost too clean for this shot. I think you might need to take a more creative edge to it to bring it all together.

 

[UnknownBro]

I think your editing is almost too clean for this shot. I think you might need to take a more creative edge to it to bring it all together.

like bump up the clarity?

 

[UnknownBro]

I put a very slight topaz filter on it.

 

[jenko]

Love her hair and outfit. Cute model.

Hate the hands. Too over-the-top garish.

The color and processing are nice.

 

[UnknownBro]

thank you kind sir.

 

[Trever1t]

Couple of things bother me. One is the light, it just looks very unnatural. The other is the framing with the dirt adn trees in the picture. I think if you could have her, the hand and the wall in the frame only it'd be 300% improved right there.